Video Hook Ideas: Six Patterns, and the Promise Each One Makes
Every opening line belongs to one of about six shapes, and each shape obliges the rest of the video differently. Pick the shape first; the wording is the easy half.

Why a list of lines does not help
The six patterns, and what each one costs you
| Pattern | Opens with | What it obliges you to have |
|---|---|---|
| Contradiction | The consensus being wrong | An actual disagreement you can defend |
| Result first | The outcome | The result, shown rather than described |
| The cost | What the viewer is losing | A cost you can quantify in the next sentence |
| Direct question | Something they have wondered | Only the answer. The safest pattern here |
| Instruction | A method | A method that repeats for someone else |
| Specificity | A number or a constraint | The specific thing to exist |
Video hook ideas have to fit the format
| Where it goes | Practical budget | Why |
|---|---|---|
| Short-form video | ~70 characters | It is spoken in the first breath, not read |
| Long-form video | ~120 characters | Still said before any intro animation |
| Caption first line | ~90 characters | It has to survive the fold |
| Thread opener | ~200 characters | The only post most people see |
Where a hook crosses into something platforms have rules about
How to write the line once you have the shape
- Say it out loud. If you run out of breath, it is a sentence, not a hook.
- Delete the run-up. "So in this video I wanted to talk about" is nine words before the
- Put a concrete noun in it. Something the viewer can picture or count.
- Check it keeps the promise. Read the last thirty seconds of your script, then read the
What makes a good video hook?
How long should a video hook be?
Are question hooks weak?
Should every video start with a hook?
Put it to work
Tools for the job you just read about
Free to run, most of them without an account.
Video Hook Generator
Eighteen openings for your topic, sorted by the promise each one makes.
Clickbait Title Checker
Scores a title on the patterns that get it demoted, not the ones that get it clicked.
Jargon & Acronym Detector
The words that make sense to you and not to whoever just arrived.
Sentence Rhythm Analyzer
Why a draft with nothing wrong with it still reads flat.
Crutch Phrase Finder
The phrases you use every time, which you are the last to notice.
Weighted Character Counter
Why your editor says 240 and the post box says 287.
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